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Work in Progress…

Some of my WIP. Actually it’s finished but I keep messing!

‘He’d seen how someone could feel such empathy and shock at the demise of their own enemy. Jeremy wondered what that must feel like. He hadn’t felt that way about his own Corporal let alone someone he didn’t know. Finally, she had looked through her fingers at what remained of the giant rat and Boris. He had thought she might be sobbing, but when she stood upright again and he stared at the full length of her frame, he saw she was heaving. Susie Walker: brave, cunning spy, someone who could laugh in the face of adversity yet cry at the things she found shocking. He thought what a real woman she was. Jeremy put his head into his hands and sat like that for a moment. He’d had his fantasy fix. Now it was time to do some further digging, and he pitied anyone who got in his way.’

Written by Antonia Bloom (ABloom Writing Services)

March 16, 2013 at 1:10 pm

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